I Neglect

I am unable to express how ardently I desire that you become More

Then you have been.

I lose you in my imagination

Dilapidated and distressed.

How I regret

How I have neglected you, this state of disrepair,ย 

I am a decay of that which I have known.


11 thoughts on “I Neglect”

  1. ‘Tis human to lose those whom we desire to our imagination. What is extraordinary is to see people for who they really are. I went nearly 30 years on the planet before I found someone who did not wear 3-D glasses or gaze into a kaliedoscope when they looked at me. Write on.

  2. It occurs to me that I may have completely fucked up my interpretation of your poem. I have two truths at this moment:
    1) I have alcohol in my system and it just doesn’t move through the system as quickly as it used to.
    2) I don’t understand poetry at all, and don’t know what the heck you’re talking about, but I still really liked your poem and felt compelled to comment, despite my own ridiculousness.

    1. This comment made me laugh! Lol thank you for commenting & following. I will check out more of your work once I have time. ๐Ÿ™‚
      You were right, most of my writing is me mostly talking to myself or parts of my character. Sometimes I refer to others but itโ€™s all very ambiguous. I’m not really a fan of writing about things I dislike because if Iโ€™ve forgotten and then re-read some time later, those feelings come back to me, so I prefer to be vague. I hate feelings.

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